Sunday, March 25, 2007

Our First Writing Exercise

I'm going to try something new. We'll just see how it goes. I love getting comments from people, having other streams flowing into the river, so to speak. I'd really like to have even more. So I'm going to post some of my favorite writing exercises. If you feel like doing the exercises as well (whether or not you consider yourself a writer), it would make my day if you would post what you wrote in the comments section. Remember, it doesn't have to be great writing. The point of this is simply exploration -- and sharing.

So here goes. From Poemcrazy by Susan Goldsmith Wooldridge, answer the following questions. (My answers are in italics. Just substitute your own.)

If I were a color, what color would I be? burgundy
movement -- lurch
sound -- snatches of a hummed symphony
animal -- hummingbird
song -- I can't remember the title, but it's a piano piece full of sadness, hope, and longing.
number -- one
car -- I wouldn't be a car. I'd be a bicycle with a white basket and a baby seat on the back.
furniture -- one of those bowl shaped wicker chairs with lots of cushions
food -- ice cream with nuts
musical instrument -- pan flute
place -- a backyard garden
element in nature -- waterfall
tree -- willow
What is something I'm afraid of? nothingness
What's the word hiding behind my eyes? longing

Now, using what you have written above, write a few lines about yourself, beginning with
I am ...

I am a hummingbird,
stalking bright flower faces,
persistent, alone ...

I am the liquid notes of a pan flute,
barely rising above
the roar of the waterfall.

I am a willow tree,
bent over the banks
of a chortling stream.

Now you try. I can't wait to read about YOU!

9 comments:

Mark Armstrong said...

Alright, let's give this thing a whirl...

If I were a color, what color would I be? green
movement -- forward
sound -- wind
animal -- thoroughbred stallion
song -- Amazing Grace
number -- 222
car -- Mazda 3
food -- Italian Ziti with Sausage
musical instrument -- Martin Guitar
place -- a virtual world
element in nature -- storm
tree -- birch
What is something I'm afraid of? fear
What's the word hiding behind my eyes? expectation

Fear billows like the wind
Through the birch trees
Right before a storm

Off in the distance
The ground begins to shake

I turn to look with anxious expectation
As a dark majestic stallion
Tears into the straight

Fear gives way to wonder
At his speed and striking grace
Power, strength and stillness on his face.

Jenn said...

This is from Kaitlyn. I don't let her read my blog, but I thought she would enjoy this exercise, which she did!

If I were a color, what color would I be? pink
movement -- splash
sound -- giggle
animal -- dolphin
song -- I'm just a kid
number -- seven
car -- slug bug
furniture -- queen bed
food -- lollipop
musical instrument -- guitar
place -- dayton
element in nature -- wind
tree -- cherry tree
What is something I'm afraid of? Sharks
What's the word hiding behind my eyes? Hiper

Now, using what you have written above, write a few lines about yourself, beginning with

I am...

I am just a kid,
hiper and constantly giggling,
loaded up on lollipops.

I am a dolphin,
splashing around,
avoiding the shark bites.

Jason said...

color - forest green
movement - explosion
sound - trickling water
animal - bear
song - go to extremes - billy joel
number - 42
car - jeep or land rover
furniture - old beat up couch in the den
food - champagne - an aquired taste
musical instrument - trumpet
place - carnival funhouse
element in nature - volcano
tree - oak
Afraid of - being alone
Word behind eyes - isolated

I am a bear, unpredictable, full of rage.
I fear yet crave isolation.

I am the beat up couch you take for granted, the workhorse car you never think about.

I am a volcano, sometimes I rumble, sometimes I erupt.

I always am seeking yet I never find. And I am never satisfied.


Damn Jen, I'm just not a poet... oh well, I tried... jas

Betty Armstrong said...

Okay, Jenn. We all know you didn't your writing talent from me, but I'll give it a try.

If I were a color, what color would I be? baby blue
movement -- walk
sound -- humming
animal -- golden retriever
song -- It's My Party and I'll Cry If I Want To or It is Well with My Soul (depending on the day)
number -- 12
car -- Something reliable but not flashy. Maybe a Saturn
furniture -- A rocking chair
food -- chocolate
musical instrument – player piano
place -- a calm lake
element in nature -- rain cloud
tree -- pink dogwood
What is something I'm afraid of? Being unloved
What's the word hiding behind my eyes? regret
Now, using what you have written above, write a few lines about yourself, beginning with
I am ...

I am a golden retriever,
faithful to the end and craving your love and attention.

I am a player piano, always making music.
Sometimes melancholy, sometimes upbeat, but never silent.

I am a rain cloud ready to lose its moisture at any given moment,
Talk about anything important to me and the showers will fall.

Mary Brown said...

If I were a color, what color would I be? blue
movement -- slow danicng
sound -- raindrops on the roof
animal -- otter
song -- It is well with my soul
number -- 4
car -- ?
food -- Toast with cinnamon and suger
musical instrument -- Violin
place -- the depths of the ocean
element in nature -- rain
tree -- willow
What is something I'm afraid of? failure
What's the word hiding behind my eyes? confusion

I am...

I am the rain falling on the roof, quiet but noticeable.

I am the depths of the ocean, dark and mysterious but the few who have traveled there have seen the beautiful life that exists there.


That is all I could come up with. It took me a long time just to write two sentences. I think I'll leave the writing up to you Jenn :)

Becca said...

Ok. Let's try this.

If I were a color, what color would I be? Well, at this moment, I would be gray because I just woke up from a nap and my brain is still foggy. Normally, I would be "color wonder orange". You know, clear at first, but if you let me sit, I become a vibrant orange :). I'm probably supposed to answer this concisely, but I'm a stay at home mom, so when I get the opportunity to "talk" to a grown up, I seize it with all I've got. Ok. Focus.
movement --
sound --
animal --
song -- "I'm too sexy for my ..."

Ok, Jenn. I give up for now. I will try to come back to this when I have more than 1/4 of my brain functioning. Too much Tupperware this week I guess.

Becca

Rachael Stanley said...

Here you go, Jenn. Hi to any of the Armstrong clan who are reading this.

If I were a color, what color would I be? blue
movement -- flowing
sound – rain falling on water
animal – cat
song – Happy by Phil Keaggy
number -- 18
car – pearlized blue mini van
food – potato soup
musical instrument --violin
place – a cozy kitchen
element in nature -- water
tree -- pecan
What is something I'm afraid of? ghosts
What's the word hiding behind my eyes? Contentment

I am the brook flowing under the pecans,
Singing my plik-plok song in the rain.

I am the calico cat curled contentedly
on the red-checked table cloth
while potato soup simmers on the stove.

I am the violin whose voice evokes--
Sometimes ghosts of sadness, death and regret,
Sometimes barefoot summer days,
Sometimes shrieking, howling alley cat fights.

I am eighteen different shades of blue.

Becca said...

Ok. Trying this again.

Color: color wonder orange
Movement: running river
Sound: wind
Animal: My cat Mel
Song: A classical piano piece that starts sofly, swells, softens, then swells again
Number: 29
Car: Minivan
Food: Mocha cheesecake
Musical instrument: Piano
Place: An open field in eastern oregon
Element in nature: Wind
Tree: Maple
What is something I'm afraid of: Failure
What's the word hiding behind my eyes? Hope

Up and down,
Quickly and slowly.
The ride of my life,
The emotions of my soul.

Seeking to give,
Fearing the pain.
Holding back,
Guarding my heart.

Like the wind in an open field blows sometimes softly, sometimes fierce, so my heart whispers and rages.

Like my cat runs away, then returns for affections, I too cautiously look for unconditional love.

The music of my soul never stops. It trickles and swells and dances around, but it never, ever stops.

Becca

Katie said...

Ok, writing is definitely not my thing (although I spend hours a day writing reports it's nothing as creative as this).

If I were a color, what color would I be? Dark Blue
movement -- bouncing
sound -- laughter
animal -- wolf
song -- "I can only imagine"
number -- 5
car -- A volkswagen jetta
furniture -- A leather couch with reclining sections
food -- phad thai
musical instrument -- tambourine
place -- the beach
element in nature -- ocean
tree -- oak
What is something I'm afraid of? not being able to walk again
What's the word hiding behind my eyes? fatigue

Now, using what you have written above, write a few lines about yourself, beginning with
I am ...

I am ... dang it...I'm not good at writing poetry...Ok, I'll keep trying

I am a wolf
Howling at the moon
Against the midnight blue sky

I am a child
Bouncing across the beach
Laughing as the water laps at my toes

I am a strong mind
Wrapped in a failing body
Wondering how long it will hold on